I enjoy writing abstract, fractured surreal poetry, especially about God. I don't know how many folks here are into that kind of stuff or that kind of style but feel free to read and comment.
The Blood
Rushing, Cascading, flowing, blood of;
Yahweh- washing, scrubbing, drawing; sinners-
Dancing beneath the waterfall, with mouths
Wide open; gender, ethnicity, age, sophistry
Eroded, so vague, underneath the dark red blood
Bathing in the blood of a lamb from Jerusalem
Nations scream for joy, holy laughter erupts-
Beggars, Kings, Rich men, all come
Their garments are made white, made white,
White as snow. Tears fall, strong men tremble
Mothers hold their children. There is wrath, wrath,
Wrath outside the camp; screams of torment, lament,
Anguish, - In the city they were trampling the blood in the
Dirt, blood in the soil, dancing and shouting for glee
The Father shall avenge His Son; His wrath shall cascade,
Flow, rush upon the wicked- It shall not be ebbed.
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