I guess I'm saying that in the case of a first person narrative, some "I"s are necessary. In this case, I think they may have gone about two too many. In short, in my opinion, they calculated wrong but I guess time will tell.
__________________
There are no weapons of mass destruction in Iraq, Chuck Norris lives in Houston.
Either the United States will destroy ignorance, or ignorance will destroy the United States. – W.E.B. DuBois